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Your submission at Articles for creation: Masutaro Otani (August 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LR.127 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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LR.127 (talk) 22:50, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thankyou for taking the time to review my submission. Masutaro Otani is my great grandfather and much of the information is public online anyway however parts are told to me directly from his sons. Please could you tell me specifically what I need to do to get the page published. Which specific parts need reliable sources and I'll do my best to provide them. Masutaro Otani is quite an important person in the British judo world and I'm shocked he doesn't have a Wikipedia page already. Regards Finlay73 (talk) 14:10, 13 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Finlay73! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LR.127 (talk) 22:50, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Prescott Upton (August 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Reliable, secondary sources are required.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 00:44, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Prescott Upton (August 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Asilvering was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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asilvering (talk) 02:46, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the page now. Please let me know if this is acceptable Finlay73 (talk) 16:45, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Robin Otani (August 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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KylieTastic (talk) 18:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Masutaro Otani has been accepted

Masutaro Otani, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. It is commonplace for new articles to start out as stubs and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Theroadislong (talk) 15:28, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thankyou very much for accepting the page. I have learnt a lot and will continue to learn more and hopefully create articles and connect sources with pages Finlay73 (talk) 15:43, 21 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tomio Otani (August 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CFA was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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C F A 💬 03:21, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia and copyright

Hello Finlay73! Your additions to Draft:Tomio Otani have been removed in whole or in part, as they appear to have added copyrighted content without evidence that the source material is in the public domain or has been released by its owner or legal agent under a suitably free and compatible copyright license. (To request such a release, see Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission.) While we appreciate your contributions to Wikipedia, it's important to understand and adhere to guidelines about using information from sources to prevent copyright and plagiarism issues. Here are the key points:

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Your submission at Articles for creation: William Prescott Upton (August 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sources are publications by Upton, directory listings, citations or otherwise not in-depth. If submitted without substantial relevant improvement, the draft may be rejected meaning it will no longer be considered.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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S0091 (talk) 17:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi I thought that him being author of multiple books, one of which was especially famous, would be enough for a Wikipedia page? Please can you tell me why not and what I could do to get the Wikipedia page accepted? Thankyou Finlay73 (talk) 01:13, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Prescott Upton (August 30)

Your recent article submission has been rejected and cannot be resubmitted. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by OhHaiMark was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia.

OhHaiMark (talk) 03:47, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Masutaro Otani Society of Judo moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Masutaro Otani Society of Judo. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:25, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I came across this article while doing new page patrolling, and had to move it to drafts as the sources don't come even close to establishing notability of the subject, being a mix of passing (or no) mentions and primary sources. For notability of organisations, per WP:ORG, we need to see significant coverage, directly of the subject, in multiple secondary sources (newspapers, magazines, TV or radio programmes, books, etc.) that are both reliable and entirely independent (of the subject, and of each other). Once you've found and cited such sources, you may request a review of this article (now draft) by clicking on the blue 'submit the draft' button, before it is published. Best, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:30, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

September 2024

Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. It appears that you copied or moved content from one or more pages into another page. While you are welcome to re-use Wikipedia's content (here or elsewhere), Wikipedia's licensing does require that you provide attribution to the original contributor(s). When copying within Wikipedia, this is supplied at minimum in an edit summary at the page into which you've copied content, disclosing the copying and linking to the copied page, e.g., copied content from [[page name]]; see that page's history for attribution. It is good practice, especially if copying is extensive, to also place a properly formatted {{copied}} template on the talk pages of the source and destination. Please provide attribution for this duplication if it has not already been supplied by another editor, and if you have copied material between pages before, even if it was a long time ago, you should provide attribution for that also. You can read more about the procedure and the reasons at Wikipedia:Copying within Wikipedia. I have added a statement to Talk:Lady Elizabeth Bourchier to indicate where the content was copied from. Schazjmd (talk) 22:34, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ah I apologise I didn't realise. Thankyou for teaching me! Finlay73 (talk) 22:36, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lady Elizabeth Bourchier moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Lady Elizabeth Bourchier. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 01:56, 11 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lady Elizabeth Bourchier (September 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Lady Elizabeth Bourchier and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:06, 11 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I can't help but say I'm confused since I used citations from the Wikipedia pages of her husband father and son Finlay73 (talk) 13:07, 11 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Tomio Otani has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Tomio Otani. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 07:31, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thankyou, also I have found more sources online in a book and I was wondering if I edited my article to include them it would slow down the process of getting it accepted? Finlay73 (talk) 23:17, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Masutaro Otani Society of Judo has been accepted

Masutaro Otani Society of Judo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:05, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey thankyou for your review of the Masutaro Otani Society of Judo wikipedia page and im sure many ex members will be delighted to see it. Please could you have a look at the submitted page for Tomio Otani. Kind Regards Finlay73 (talk) 20:04, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tomio Otani (October 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://www.seishinryu.net/AbbeSensei.htm. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 17:14, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]