Talk:Sleeping Beauty (1959 film)/GA3
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Nominator: De Disney (talk · contribs) 13:08, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this after work today. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Wolverine X-eye: I just wanted to remind you of this review. Best, voorts (talk/contributions) 23:58, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
- @De Disney: 😬 It's the 29th...I think I will continue with this review tomorrow, unless work gets in the way, which is often the case. I apologize for being an asshole, but work has been overwhelming and has taken a huge toll on my mental health. I'm really, really sorry for dragging you down. I'll try by all means to make things right. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 20:03, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
- Don't worry, I understand, I can also be very busy because of work. Take as much time as you need to do this. De Disney (talk) 13:27, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Besides, it gives me enough time to fix any potential issues that you list in your review. De Disney (talk) 13:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- asilvering (talk) 17:05, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Please take note of the message on top of my user page. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 18:00, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:36, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- I know. Just give me 4 days. I need to complete some very important off-wiki projects. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 17:34, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll take a look at this tomorrow. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 19:32, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- I know. Just give me 4 days. I need to complete some very important off-wiki projects. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 17:34, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:36, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- Please take note of the message on top of my user page. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 18:00, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- @De Disney: 😬 It's the 29th...I think I will continue with this review tomorrow, unless work gets in the way, which is often the case. I apologize for being an asshole, but work has been overwhelming and has taken a huge toll on my mental health. I'm really, really sorry for dragging you down. I'll try by all means to make things right. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 20:03, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Prose
[edit]- who was cursed by the evil fairy Maleficent to die from a prick from the spindle of a spinning wheel. This could be better phrased
- Merryweather uses her gift to weaken the curse; Aurora will instead fall into a deep sleep until true love's kiss breaks the spell. Unclear
- Still fearful, Stefan orders all the kingdom's spinning wheels burned. There should be a "be" or "to be" before burned
- The fairies move into a forest cottage, giving up magic and living as peasants, and rename Aurora to Briar Rose. the part after "and" is ungrammatical
- and tell her she cannot see the man again. Ungrammatical
Image review
[edit]- Images are appropriately licensed.