User contributions for Giddy001

28 November 2024

• 14:0414:04, 28 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Roselle juice In the last line of the 4th paragraph, I rephrased the sentence for easy sentence flow and better readability. Under overview, I added "s" to "The zobo drinks", deleted "," and capitaized "I" in "It" for grammatical consistency. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:1413:14, 28 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Tiger nut drink In the first sentence of the second paragraph, I added "," after "dates", deleted an excess space, and replaced "the drink" with "Tigernut drink" all for precision and to avoid repetition. current Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4701:47, 28 November 2024 diff hist 0 Zulu people No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit

27 November 2024

• 19:3019:30, 27 November 2024 diff hist −3 m World Englishes Note; The instruction in this article was to use American English, thus I corrected the following spellings; "emphasise, localised, indiginised, indianisation, neighbouring and nativisation, in order to maintain the consistency of American English as instructed by the article. I also removed "'s" in "Strevens's'" for grammatical accuracy. current Tag: Visual edit

26 November 2024

• 14:3914:39, 26 November 2024 diff hist +21 m Jeff Bezos I paraphrased the last sentence of the first paragraph for easy readability Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 13:4613:46, 26 November 2024 diff hist +14 m Funke Akindele I paraphrased the last sentence of paragraph 5, and Paragraph 6 for clarity and grammatical accuracy. Tag: Visual edit
• 12:2112:21, 26 November 2024 diff hist −23 Moyo Lawal No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
• 11:2311:23, 26 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Odumeje In the first paragraph, I added "," after "Nigeria". In the third paragraph, I deleted "the' to avoid repetition, and in the fifth paragraph, I added ",' after the quoted phrase for effective punctuating and conciseness. current Tag: Visual edit
• 10:2210:22, 26 November 2024 diff hist +5 m Military aircraft insignia I changed the spellings of ; standardised, stilised, and mobilised to the correct British English in order to maintain the consistency of the article. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:4409:44, 26 November 2024 diff hist +2 m Hausa language In the second sentence under Chad, I changed the structure to "A city where it is spoken includes NDjamena. I also added "s" to "dialect" for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
• 08:4808:48, 26 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Enugu State In the first sentence of the third paragraph, I added "," after "Etteh Uno". In the first sentence of fifth paragraph, I deleted "manufacturing" which appeared twice. In the last sentence under the politics section, I added "," after "Enugu". Lastly, in the second sentence under the paragraph about Electoral system, I added a determiner "the' before the word " threshold" for clarity. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
• 00:2000:20, 26 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Agbada In the 3rd sentence under history, I deleted "." and decapitalized "I" in "in" to become "a big, loose-fitting, ankle-length garment in which the counterpiece is usually covered". current Tag: Visual edit

25 November 2024

• 22:0222:02, 25 November 2024 diff hist +24 m Fine Things (film) In the 4th sentence of the second paragraph, I linked the meaning of "chemotherapy". In the 7th sentence of the 1st paragraph, I linked the meaning of "enthusiastic". I added a missing "that", and paraphrased "and they ever lived happily after" to "and they lived happily ever after" for clarity. current Tag: Visual edit
• 20:5420:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Jadrolita In the last sentence of the career aspect, I added "," in the phrase "this unique character proprllrd her to viral fame, and solidified her as a prominent figure in the entertainment industry. Tag: Visual edit
• 20:2020:20, 25 November 2024 diff hist +31 m Nasty C I added "," in the phrase "he teamed up with American rapper, T.I., for the protest song". current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:3019:30, 25 November 2024 diff hist +6 m Nigerian Breweries In the second sentence of the first paragraph, I added "," after CFAO, to become "including Johh Holt, GBO, SCOA, CFAO, and UTC", for orderliness. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 18:2018:20, 25 November 2024 diff hist −11 m Flag of Nigeria In the first paragraph, I added "s" to stand which appeared twice, to become "with green representing agriculture and white representing peace and unity", for clarity. I also paraphrased the last sentence under history and design to be "on 1 October 1960, the modern-ay flag became the first official flag of an independent Nigeria and was raised for the first time in a ceremony by lieutenant David Ejoor", for clarity. current Tag: Visual edit
• 10:3510:35, 25 November 2024 diff hist +2 m Naira Marley In the first sentence of the 8th paragraph, I added "," in the sentence "his new record label, Marlian Records,". Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 10:1310:13, 25 November 2024 diff hist +7 m Kizz Daniel I added "," to "His former label, G-Worldwide". I deleted "," and inserted "." at the end of a sentence. Lastly, I added "," before "Daniel". current Tag: Visual edit
• 09:3509:35, 25 November 2024 diff hist +19 m Nelson Mandela I fixed the "." in the right position for orderliness. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 08:0108:01, 25 November 2024 diff hist +324 User talk:Giddy001 →Please be more careful with links: Reply Tag: Reply
• 05:5405:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist +8 m Yana Santos I added "-" to "preschool" for clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 05:2905:29, 25 November 2024 diff hist +13 m Lere Oyewumi I changed "a" to "the". I changed "He was educated" to "He had his formal education" for the purpose clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 03:5603:56, 25 November 2024 diff hist −3 m Billy Rautenbach I deleted "and" in the second sentence of the first paragraph to reduce repetition.. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 01:5401:54, 25 November 2024 diff hist −2 m Timaya I removed "to" and replaced it with "till". I italicize "upgrade", "tomato" and "true story". I removed "the" and replaced it with "his". I added "-" in between "up" and "coming" because it can also be spelt as a compound word. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:5500:55, 25 November 2024 diff hist −17 m Isaya Mwita Charles I rephrased "He completed his certificate in secondary education" to "He completed his secondary education". I removed "2015" from the bracket. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:3600:36, 25 November 2024 diff hist +9 m Olatubosun Oladapo I made minor edit while at the same rephrasing sentences for the purpose of clarity, consistency and precision. I did a total reconstruction of paragraph three because of the author's inconsistent style of writing. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

24 November 2024

• 23:3223:32, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1 m Nedu Wazobia In the first paragraph, I added "l" to Emmanuel and changed "aa" to "is". I added ", after Emmanuel. I changed has to have, and deleted "has'. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 23:0623:06, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4 m African art I deleted "of". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 22:2622:26, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 m African feminism I added "on" in the sentence "it centers on". current Tag: Visual edit
• 18:5918:59, 24 November 2024 diff hist +42 m Ukrainian National Women's League of America I added "al" to "education" and changed "aiming to support" to "aimed at supporting". Also, I rephrased the last sentence in paragraph four to enhance clarity and consistency. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 17:5117:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist +7 m Liaan Ferreira I added "," after 1986. I added "a" before "multi-talented". I also added "and" after "ovation". All these were done to improve and enhance accuracy and consistency. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 15:2915:29, 24 November 2024 diff hist +12 m Taalam Acey I added a link to "poet" for reference purposes. I also added "the" to paragraph three's first and second sentences to enhance readability. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 15:0315:03, 24 November 2024 diff hist +2 m Ida A. Johnson I bracketed the date to enhance flow and clarity. I changed "art community" to "community art" for easy assimilation. I also added "s" to "service" to enhance accuracy. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 07:0407:04, 24 November 2024 diff hist +5 m Yoruba religion I added "s" to the word "practice" in the sentence "the practices of he Yoruba people. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 06:5206:52, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Odigba I added a comma and linked the meaning of longevity. current Tag: Visual edit
• 06:3206:32, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Jamopyper I linked the meaning of dimension and changed lead to led in the sentence "this led him to pursue a career in music" for grammatical accuracy. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 06:0606:06, 24 November 2024 diff hist −1 m List of Africans by net worth I changed "do not' to "don't" for brevity and conciseness Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 05:5405:54, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Herman Basudde I added a comma after the phrase "before Bassude died," for conciseness; before Basudde died, he insisted... Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 05:2405:24, 24 November 2024 diff hist +33 m Paul Kukubo Linking of meanings to "Columbia" and "Kenya". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 05:0905:09, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Nse Essien I bracketed the date and added a comma after the bracket. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 04:5704:57, 24 November 2024 diff hist +24 m Tehn Diamond Omission of date bracket and linking of meaning for "Borrowdale Brook' and "Casper Nyovest" Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 04:2804:28, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 m Taalam Acey I added a comma after the date bracket. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 04:2004:20, 24 November 2024 diff hist +5 m Gold (2024 film) I linked the definition of badminton. Tag: Visual edit
• 04:0404:04, 24 November 2024 diff hist −4 m Sam Dede I deleted a wrongly used "the" Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 03:5703:57, 24 November 2024 diff hist +1 Nigerian Pidgin I inserted space after a period. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 00:4700:47, 24 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Peller (comedian) I linked an explanation for the name "Jadrolita" a Nigerian streamer and youtuber Tag: Visual edit
• 00:2700:27, 24 November 2024 diff hist +7 m Elson Kambalu I changed the phrase "who only realizing his career" to "who only realized his career". Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 00:1400:14, 24 November 2024 diff hist +15 m Ayo Ayoola-Amale In the third paragraph, under Early Life and Education, I enhanced the words to become "moved to the northern region of Nigeria". Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

23 November 2024

• 21:2021:20, 23 November 2024 diff hist +22 m Thandi Brewer I linked the definition of debut and replaced the last pronoun "she" with the name of the author "Brewer". Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit