User contributions for 173.162.211.85

30 March 2022

• 16:3316:33, 30 March 2022 diff hist +259 NKVD filtration camps wow. See talk Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 03:2903:29, 30 March 2022 diff hist +9 Body language see talk re “whilst”, & re deeper wording issues Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 01:3801:38, 30 March 2022 diff hist +55 Body language Gosh… this conveyed striking info I’d not learned. Still, the wording was loose enuf too interfere with readers’ easy comprehension of the content. (That said, it was not as clumsy as my use of ‘’das Deutsch’’. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

25 March 2022

• 19:2419:24, 25 March 2022 diff hist +21 Samuel Eilenberg Fixed grammar: —> “(and the Eilenberg–Steenrod axioms are named for the pair),” avoiding clumsy ambiguous syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

22 March 2022

• 03:4603:46, 22 March 2022 diff hist +408 Isterberg rewording, hopefully better approximating a German colleague’s intended English tone Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

21 March 2022

• 17:5317:53, 21 March 2022 diff hist +4 500 Miles + lk, re ‘may be related to the older folk song "900 Miles" (Roud 4959’) Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

19 March 2022

• 20:4920:49, 19 March 2022 diff hist +521 Talk:Sanford Underground Research Facility →Well …how’s about “ Grammar and Style for the Physical Sciences “?: new section
• 20:3020:30, 19 March 2022 diff hist −10 Sanford Underground Research Facility Fixed grammar: we don’t definitively deprecate contractions. But this “they’ll” is too clumsy and vague to merit positive mention of any exceptions to the anti-cont policy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

17 March 2022

• 15:2015:20, 17 March 2022 diff hist +569 Talk:Celts →HLA = Human Leukocyte Antigen: new section Tag: Disambiguation links added

16 March 2022

• 16:2716:27, 16 March 2022 diff hist +186 User talk:173.162.211.85 No edit summary current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 16:1816:18, 16 March 2022 diff hist +951 User talk:Volten001 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 15:3415:34, 16 March 2022 diff hist +395 User talk:Volten001 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 13:5713:57, 16 March 2022 diff hist +522 User talk:Volten001 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 13:3913:39, 16 March 2022 diff hist +514 User talk:Volten001 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 13:0413:04, 16 March 2022 diff hist +30 Talk:Hippocratic Oath for scientists →Copyrighted text: WiP
• 13:0013:00, 16 March 2022 diff hist +826 Talk:Hippocratic Oath for scientists →Copyrighted text: addition TBC, hopably in the next 18 hrs.
• 11:4011:40, 16 March 2022 diff hist −1 Hippocratic Oath for scientists “started intention”—> “stated intention”; see talk Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 06:2006:20, 16 March 2022 diff hist +304 Talk:Mind uploading in fiction →Change title to "Mind uploading in fiction"?: Ah well
• 04:4604:46, 16 March 2022 diff hist +15 Fall; or, Dodge in Hell Fixed grammar: + potentially crucial hyphen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 04:4104:41, 16 March 2022 diff hist +1 Fall; or, Dodge in Hell oops: had to break up unforeseen to-from sequence; no way like “to & fro” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 04:3304:33, 16 March 2022 diff hist +255 Fall; or, Dodge in Hell Fixed grammar & style; SO SORRY, {{NOT| a book review}}, needs reveal of ending; & not hardly a minor edit… should have pushed that switch right, or left? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 00:3200:32, 16 March 2022 diff hist +54 Sheik I have no idea what motivated the silly choice of article title; see talk Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

15 March 2022

• 23:5123:51, 15 March 2022 diff hist +399 Talk:Sheik →HDWN4, or similar: new section
• 23:3323:33, 15 March 2022 diff hist +10 Sheik more specificity in Ocarina of Time entry Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 22:2022:20, 15 March 2022 diff hist +5 Wiki Peak Added crucial comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:2421:24, 15 March 2022 diff hist +721 Talk:Sheik Hopefully temporary, and disposable, paranoia
• 21:0621:06, 15 March 2022 diff hist +5 Talk:Sheik →"{{noredirect|The Sheik}}": uhh, “never min/no matter” was usin
• 20:0420:04, 15 March 2022 diff hist 0 Sheik “may also”, not “also may”: another HNWD4, but worth a shot now and then Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 19:5719:57, 15 March 2022 diff hist +12 Talk:Sheikh (disambiguation) →“They say everything can be replaced”
• 19:4119:41, 15 March 2022 diff hist +9 Talk:Sheikh (disambiguation) →“They say everything can be replaced”
• 19:3919:39, 15 March 2022 diff hist +245 Talk:Sheikh (disambiguation) →“They say everything can be replaced”
• 19:3119:31, 15 March 2022 diff hist +489 Talk:Sheikh (disambiguation) →Merge proposal from June: as for the men who put me here: Scroo-m
• 19:1219:12, 15 March 2022 diff hist +15 Sheikh (disambiguation) “Sheik” Is the most common in the degraded American language, and surely mostly harmless as the least rare variant Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 17:4017:40, 15 March 2022 diff hist +409 Talk:Ajñana —-
• 16:3516:35, 15 March 2022 diff hist +28 Von Neumann architecture →Development of the stored-program concept: I’s got a sneaky ‘spishin’ I di’nt complete the intended edit, tho I think I made worthwhile improvements. I should review several times, patiently waiting for samsara, or samthinsimira, to strike like Zeus’s, or mebbe Krisna’s [sic?] lightning. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:3913:39, 15 March 2022 diff hist +39 Von Neumann architecture Not all these fixes correct errors, so the rest are at least partially matters of taste. Let editors of wisdom correct those I’ve screwn up, without fear of denunciation, let alone derision. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:1713:17, 15 March 2022 diff hist +55 Von Neumann architecture Barely noticeable tweaks for more precise grammar Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 March 2022

• 01:0601:06, 14 March 2022 diff hist +567 Talk:Critique of political economy →“See Talk page; comment won’t fit here ….”
• 00:4200:42, 14 March 2022 diff hist 0 Critique of political economy see talk page, won’t fit here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

13 March 2022

• 15:5815:58, 13 March 2022 diff hist +24 Marxian economics tuned wording to reduce minor syntactic ambiguities in the elaborate theoretical distinctions. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 15:4115:41, 13 March 2022 diff hist +8 Marxian economics both syntactic and conceptual tweaks to the distinctions Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

11 March 2022

• 20:1220:12, 11 March 2022 diff hist +11 The Jesus Rolls I think I fixed a grievous syntactical error. I sure hope so. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 19:5819:58, 11 March 2022 diff hist +2 The Jesus Rolls added 2 punc chars, healing grievous disaster Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 19:5019:50, 11 March 2022 diff hist +222 The Jesus Rolls Fixed typos et alia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 19:3419:34, 11 March 2022 diff hist +67 The Jesus Rolls Fixed most of my ‘’faux pas’’s Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 19:0919:09, 11 March 2022 diff hist +23 The Jesus Rolls a lot of rewording and grammar-fixes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 18:5618:56, 11 March 2022 diff hist +134 The Jesus Rolls Fixed grammar, Added many links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

10 March 2022

• 15:5615:56, 10 March 2022 diff hist +779 User talk:173.162.211.85 →October 2021: Reply Tag: Reply

7 March 2022

• 17:4217:42, 7 March 2022 diff hist +13 Optical resolution ditto Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit
• 17:3917:39, 7 March 2022 diff hist +136 Optical resolution there was nothing truly *wrong* in the version that I found, but there were so many imprecisions that very few readers would have avoided confusion by the old wording, leading to failure to absorb its intent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit