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20 August 2015

• 18:0118:01, 20 August 2015 diff hist +152 Talk:Guillotine →Why "Guillotine"?
• 17:5517:55, 20 August 2015 diff hist +4 Bindi Irwin →Post Steve Irwin death: added "had" because it comes soon after reference to Steve Irwin's death

19 August 2015

• 14:5914:59, 19 August 2015 diff hist +369 Talk:Murder of Bobby Greenlease →How about aftermath?: new section
• 13:3213:32, 19 August 2015 diff hist +40 The Sneetches and Other Stories →"The Sneetches": supplied "Fix-It-Up Chappie"
• 13:3013:30, 19 August 2015 diff hist +7 The Sneetches and Other Stories →"The Zax": reworded to "to get past each other"
• 12:4212:42, 19 August 2015 diff hist 0 The 500 Hats of Bartholomew Cubbins changed a semicolon to a comma

17 August 2015

• 17:4017:40, 17 August 2015 diff hist +479 Talk:Dr. Seuss →Semi-protected edit request on 17 August 2015: new section
• 16:2616:26, 17 August 2015 diff hist −26 The 500 Hats of Bartholomew Cubbins →Plot summary: reword to make "451st hat onwards" more dramatic
• 16:1516:15, 17 August 2015 diff hist +141 Talk:Murgatroyd →Murgatroyd Road in Maryland: new section

12 August 2015

• 21:4821:48, 12 August 2015 diff hist +1 Stacey Castor "episode" misspelled
• 21:4721:47, 12 August 2015 diff hist +205 Talk:Stacey Castor →choice of wording: new section
• 21:4421:44, 12 August 2015 diff hist +127 Talk:Stacey Castor →maiden name?: new section
• 17:5217:52, 12 August 2015 diff hist +336 Talk:Thomas Capano →update on the brothers: new section
• 17:4017:40, 12 August 2015 diff hist 0 Pierre Samuel du Pont de Nemours →Early life and family: Use colon, not semicolon.
• 17:3917:39, 12 August 2015 diff hist −1 Pierre Samuel du Pont de Nemours →Early life and family: Removed "h" to match previous spelling.
• 17:3817:38, 12 August 2015 diff hist +8 Pierre Samuel du Pont de Nemours →French Revolution: Change "immigrate" to "emigrated", and add "His son" (THIS article is not about Eleuthere).
• 17:3517:35, 12 August 2015 diff hist −4 Pierre Samuel du Pont de Nemours →Early life and family: Can leave off "the" here.
• 17:3517:35, 12 August 2015 diff hist +12 Pierre Samuel du Pont de Nemours →Early life and family: add birth & death years for E.I. DuPont (DuPont Company founder)

11 August 2015

• 20:2920:29, 11 August 2015 diff hist +1 Thomas Capano Change "who" to ", and" (notice inclusion of comma).

10 August 2015

• 15:1515:15, 10 August 2015 diff hist +60 An Affair to Remember →Production: Character name "Terry McKay" was also used in the 1939 "Love Affair" movie.
• 15:1115:11, 10 August 2015 diff hist +331 Talk:Love Affair (1939 film) →same character name in 1957: new section

3 August 2015

• 21:4321:43, 3 August 2015 diff hist −4 William Henry O'Connell →Archbishop of Boston, and Cardinal: removed "now" because it is redundant
• 19:0819:08, 3 August 2015 diff hist +1 Billy Pierce oops, missed the "o" in "whom"
• 19:0719:07, 3 August 2015 diff hist +3 Billy Pierce Specify the Yankees, although there was no interleague regular-season play then. Also change "who" to "whom".
• 18:2318:23, 3 August 2015 diff hist 0 1944 Democratic Party vice presidential candidate selection →Anti-Wallace movement: use semicolons instead of commas
• 17:5517:55, 3 August 2015 diff hist +31 Murder of Bobby Greenlease →Arrest and execution: OK, let's link to Wikipedia article about the Rosenberts.
• 17:5317:53, 3 August 2015 diff hist +1 Murder of Bobby Greenlease →Arrest and execution: add comma
• 17:4417:44, 3 August 2015 diff hist +1 Patriarchate of the West Indies →Merge with the Spanish Military Vicariate: and restored a missing right bracket
• 17:4417:44, 3 August 2015 diff hist −1 Patriarchate of the West Indies →Merge with the Spanish Military Vicariate: and forgot to add this comma
• 17:4317:43, 3 August 2015 diff hist +25 Patriarchate of the West Indies →Merge with the Spanish Military Vicariate: Cardinal & Archbishop are separate appointments. Revised this so we no longer see "Cardinal Archbishop".
• 17:4017:40, 3 August 2015 diff hist 0 Patriarchate of the West Indies →Merge with the Spanish Military Vicariate: fixed spelling of "archbishopric"
• 16:0716:07, 3 August 2015 diff hist −1 1964 Philadelphia Phillies season →Richie Allen: Removed apostrophe. If you want an apostrophe, use the plural form " Veterans' ".
• 16:0516:05, 3 August 2015 diff hist 0 1964 Philadelphia Phillies season →"The Curse of Chico Ruiz": Go to the plural form "pitchers'", because a duel involves 2 of them.
• 15:5615:56, 3 August 2015 diff hist −1 Philadelphia Phillies →Current uniform: fix misspelled "owner"
• 15:5315:53, 3 August 2015 diff hist +1 Philadelphia Phillies →Cox, Carpenter, and the "Whiz Kids" era: Used "that" instead of "the", because the team being sold was the A's, not the Phillies (Phillies are the subject of this article).
• 15:2915:29, 3 August 2015 diff hist +332 Talk:Cole Hamels →Semi-protected edit request on 30 July 2015

30 July 2015

• 19:1119:11, 30 July 2015 diff hist +858 Talk:Rubber Soul reinstate the "when were some songs composed?" section -- please explain when & why it was removed

29 July 2015

• 14:2314:23, 29 July 2015 diff hist +665 Talk:Roman Catholic Diocese of Limburg No edit summary
• 14:2214:22, 29 July 2015 diff hist +665 Talk:Franz-Peter Tebartz-van Elst →Will someone please account for this? (from a UK article on July 29, 2015): new section

28 July 2015

• 21:2621:26, 28 July 2015 diff hist −2 List of Major Archbishops of Kiev–Galicia →Primates from 1807 to 2005: remove period
• 20:5720:57, 28 July 2015 diff hist +147 Cathedral of St. Matthew the Apostle (Washington, D.C.) Add Cardinal Baum; this needs further revision when the burial has taken place.

24 July 2015

• 20:4820:48, 24 July 2015 diff hist +1 Paul Zoungrana added a missing period
• 17:5817:58, 24 July 2015 diff hist +28 Terence Cooke DO YOU UNDERSTAND why Cardinal and Archbishop are separate? Someone undid that earlier this year, and I have put it BACK IN.
• 17:5017:50, 24 July 2015 diff hist +1 Jaime Sin Use comma, not hyphen. Cardinal and Archbishop are separate appointments
• 17:4417:44, 24 July 2015 diff hist +27 Paulo Evaristo Arns separated cardinal, archbishop; they are SEPARATE appointments
• 16:3616:36, 24 July 2015 diff hist +1 Deanna Durbin →Personal life: added comma; otherwise, this can be interpreted as marrying Felix Jackson twice

23 July 2015

• 20:4420:44, 23 July 2015 diff hist −1 Maximos IV Sayegh He did (within the College of Cardinals) hold the rank of Cardinal Patriarch. So, NO comma after "Cardinal".
• 20:3820:38, 23 July 2015 diff hist −2 Anthony Peter Khoraish Besides being Patriarch, he holds (WITHIN the College of Cardinals) rank of Cardinal Patriarch. So, that comma does NOT belong!
• 20:3620:36, 23 July 2015 diff hist −2 Nasrallah Boutros Sfeir Comma which was put back in on May 29 has been removed. Besides being Patriarch, he (in the College of Cardinals) is a Cardinal Patriarch. So leave that comma off!
• 20:3320:33, 23 July 2015 diff hist −2 Bechara Boutros al-Rahi Remove comma which seems to have been put back in about May 29. He **is** "cardinal patriarch", that's why the comma should NOT be there.