Talk:Margaret Booth/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: PrinceArchelaus (talk · contribs) 20:44, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: IntentionallyDense (talk · contribs) 03:01, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

I will review this soon. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:01, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	The prose looks good here I have no complaints. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	I'm unable to access some of the sources due to IA being down but I'll verify what I can. I checked the online sources and downloaded the books used through other means. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	2c. it contains no original research.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
	7. Overall assessment.	Because of IA being down I'm going to put this on hold until I can check some of the sources more. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC) I wasn't able to do as thorough of a source check due to the archive being down but based on my other spot checks things look good. The prose is good, the article is neutral, and the detail level is appropriate. IntentionallyDense (talk) 20:31, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

• The link for ref 19 is giving me a 404 error just a heads up. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
• There is a reference in the works cited section that appears to be unused. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
• I can't access the Unterberger ref due to IA being down and I can't find anything by that name in the websites I use to download books. I'm going to hope that IA is up and running soon just because that source is used for a good chunk of this article, but until then I'm going to mark the source review on hold and continue with the rest of my review. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
• The Brownlow 1968 source isn't verifying the info present but this may be an issue with the version I downloaded. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

  Which of the Brownlow citations are you referring to? PrinceArchelaus (talk) 05:14, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Both. IntentionallyDense (talk) 06:38, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

  PrinceArchelaus If you don't address this within the next few days I will have to close this review as unsuccessful. IntentionallyDense (talk) 02:56, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

  Internet Archive is still down, but thankfully I can verify with Google Books. The listed citations verify the quotes given. Unfortunately, it doesn't show page 303 but the information was exactly on the page. PrinceArchelaus (talk) 05:25, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

  Good enough for me. IntentionallyDense (talk) 20:30, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

• By this time, Booth had graduated from Los Angeles High School. Since this subsection has a date range I think it would be worth specifying when "this time" is. If it isn't in sources then this isn't a big deal. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:48, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
• @PrinceArchelaus: There as some issues that need to be addressed before I can move on with this review and the one week timeframe to respond to feedback is running out so I just wanted to remind you that I've put this review on hold. IntentionallyDense (talk) 03:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Understood. PrinceArchelaus (talk) 05:01, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.